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>>147
Thanks for the recommendations, but you didn't quite understand me. I meant not only competent script writing, but also "how to write a story in general so that the dialogue is well-written and not idiotic, so that the actions are interesting for the reader and do not get boring, but so that it does not look like byte or like twitching keys, and how to competently write characters so that you can believe in them and feel embedded in them even if Zellig's world is unrealistic and obeys a peculiar cartoonish logic." hmmmmmmmmmmm...
Thanks for the recommendations, but you didn't quite understand me. I meant not only competent script writing, but also "how to write a story in general so that the dialogue is well-written and not idiotic, so that the actions are interesting for the reader and do not get boring, but so that it does not look like byte or like twitching keys, and how to competently write characters so that you can believe in them and feel embedded in them even if Zellig's world is unrealistic and obeys a peculiar cartoonish logic." hmmmmmmmmmmm...
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>>145
In general, you're right, Zoot. After watching Ongezellig, I was really inspired to create art, something I'd never done before. As for the idea for short stories, I have ideas for one-page comics with jokes about the characters, but I wouldn't want to do them right now because I'd like to make a full-length comic that's as long as the pilot, or maybe a little shorter. The idea of my comic is to create the perfect beginning for our heroines' story. You see, the pilot, although excellent, doesn't feel like a beginning, but rather like another episode, 4, 6, 7. I hope you know what I mean. As for the script, I'd like to ask you to recommend specific training videos about scripts, because when I tried to find something myself, I only came across garbage or off-topic ones. In general, I'd be glad to hear any answers.
In general, you're right, Zoot. After watching Ongezellig, I was really inspired to create art, something I'd never done before. As for the idea for short stories, I have ideas for one-page comics with jokes about the characters, but I wouldn't want to do them right now because I'd like to make a full-length comic that's as long as the pilot, or maybe a little shorter. The idea of my comic is to create the perfect beginning for our heroines' story. You see, the pilot, although excellent, doesn't feel like a beginning, but rather like another episode, 4, 6, 7. I hope you know what I mean. As for the script, I'd like to ask you to recommend specific training videos about scripts, because when I tried to find something myself, I only came across garbage or off-topic ones. In general, I'd be glad to hear any answers.
>>141
I understand everything, but I would still like to at least start doing something rather than do nothing at all.
I understand everything, but I would still like to at least start doing something rather than do nothing at all.
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Hi everyone, I registered here to post my ideas and creations. I've long had the idea of creating a full-fledged comic book story based on Ongezellig, but unfortunately, it has its own difficulties due to my limited knowledge of screenwriting and how to properly construct a plot. I would be very glad if someone knowledgeable in this field, or perhaps even someone studying in this field, would respond. I wish everyone good luck.